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Eve

INT - EVE’S HOUSE - NIGHT
Opening montage of EVELYN, a woman in her 20’s with long brown hair and a pale complexion. She looks to be exhausted, her eyes have dark circles around them. We follow her through daily household chores though each simple task of keeping house seems to be a trying task to her.
INT - EVE’S KITCHEN - NIGHT
The montage ends when Eve enters the kitchen. She heads over to the sink and begins to wash some used dinner plates in the sink. She seems calm at first but as she scrubs one of the plates with a sponge, her teeth begin to grit together and she furiously scrubs that dish, almost

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One Red SlashThis is what sits before me A blank sheet. Lines of blue flowing over white. And one red slash.
If you stare long enough Those blue lines fade leaving only blank white. And that one red slash.
What is the purpose of
that red slash? Why is it red? Green or black would be just as effecitve. They chose red however, a bloody tear that trickled down pale skin.
I sit and stare, thoughts as empty as the sheet before me. Is this my future? A nothingness that will be forever blank, forever forgotten, and d One Red Slash
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Eve: Final RevisionFADE IN:
INT. EVE’S LIVINGROOM - NIGHT
Upon first glance, it seems like any ordinary household room. As the camera moves, however, we see that it is currently neglected for some time. Dust covers most of the furniture, tables, and objects. Papers and random books are strewn about the room. Sitting on the couch in the center is EVELYN, a woman in her 20’s with long black hair, a pale complexion, and looks physically exhausted. She is staring unemotionally at a framed picture of herself, her husband, and their two children who all are happily smiling at the camera. Suddenly, she screams and jumps up from her seat befor Eve: Final Revision
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Eve: Revision 3FADE IN:
INT - EVE’S LIVINGROOM - NIGHT
We fade into a darkened living room. A TV sits on the right side, against a staircase. Across from the TV is a coffee table and long couch. The couch is bordered by two small tables, each with a lamp. The front door of the house can be seen across from the staircase. Upon first glance, it seems like any ordinary household room. As the camera pans, however, we see that it is currently neglected for some time. Dust covers most of the furniture, tables, and objects. Papers and random books are strewn about the room. Sitting on the couch in the center is EVELYN, a woman in her 20’s Eve: Revision 3
by ~XwhipsrageX

Eve: 2nd RevisionFADE IN
INT - EVE’S HOUSE - NIGHT
Opening montage of EVELYN, a woman in her 20’s with long brown hair and a pale complexion. She looks to be exhausted; her eyes have dark circles around them. We follow her through daily household chores though each simple task of keeping house seems to be a trying task to her. In the background during her chores, we can the see the picture of a smiling couple (the woman is EVELYN) with two children. This picture is cast in shadows and low-level lights, giving this happy scene a somewhat dark look.

INT - EVE’S KITCHEN - NIGHT
The montage ends when Eve enters Eve: 2nd Revision
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Sun Oct 17, 2004, 10:00 AM

I don't know what's wrong with me right now...I'm just not that happy. Everything seems so hard. I feel really alone and it hurts. Nobody thinks the way I do, only a few people share my same interests. A lot of people just care about themselves...I could name a few of them right now but I'd rather not cause any more problems. Heh...I knew this journal would turn into a depression release. That's how most journals work online. You start out fine and then you get lazy. Next thing you know you're only writing when you're depressed so it becomes one big, sad diary of pain.

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Current Residence: California
Interests: Indiana Jones, Resident Evil, Star Wars, Jurassic Park, Half-Life, Acting, Directing, and Writing
Favourite movie: Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade
Favourite band or musician: John Williams
Favourite genre of music: Soundtracks
Favourite artist: A person who does good art?
Favourite poet or writer: Micheal Crichton
Favourite photographer: Samantha! Because she did this really cool rose effect!
Favourite style of art: Eh...
Operating System: Windows XP
MP3 player of choice: Winamp
Shell of choice: Eh...again....
Wallpaper of choice: The one on myspace is cool. I also have an Indy one that rocks.
Skin of choice: Silent Hill 2 Maria for my winamp!
Favourite game: Tie Between 3: Resident Evil: Code Veronica, Silent Hill 2, and Indiana Jones and the Emperor's Tomb
Favourite gaming platform: PC
Favourite cartoon character: Homer Simpson
Personal Quote: "You lost today kid, but that doesn't mean you have to like it" - Fedora
Tools of the Trade: A computer!

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*DarkRiderDLMC Sep 29, 2008, 11:00:10 PM

Before The Timer Hits Zero was a nice read, thank you for posting it. I'll put you on my watch list for a couple of days to remind me to read more of your writing.

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So, I pull my coat back and real slow (no reason to start it up yet) I rest my hand by the Smith. Then I give them that cold smile and in the low, soft killing voice I say, "Gentlemen, I'm your worst nightmare. A gunfighter with a rendering station"

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